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Tuesday, October 16, 2007

Here's a humorous example of How punctuation can make “FUNNY” sense.
See what you can do with the original before looking at the two versions.

dear joe
i want a man who knows what love is all about you are generous kind thoughtful people who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior you have ruined me for other men i yearn for you i have no feelings whatsoever when we re apart i can be forever happy will you let me be yours
Sarah


Dear Joe
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever happy - will you let me be yours?
Sarah

Dear Joe
i want a man who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people who are not like you. Admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other men I yearn. For you I have no feelings whatsoever. When we're apart I can be forever happy. Will you let me be.
Yours,
Sarah